Caligula's Launderette

so areida, I feel that this poem needs a proper crit. from me, so I am working on one. I'll have it the earliest tomorrow morning. so far from just ...

fictious, the names just came to me, except for patrick's I went to and put in the meaning I wanted and got that name...but then again I watch too much ...

thank you dear for the very informative review. I think I fixed everything. I hope I did. It was my first draft and I usualy don't use punctuation in my ...

no it's entirely my fault, and now it's fix. the language is french. I thought I'd put up the one with the translations. thanks dear for the review. CL

thank you chevy...I do hope this poems lives that long. I've been listening to U2 lately they can inspired really interesting things. the feels a little bereft of the poem. ...

thank you dear for such a informative review. uhh yeah the title is fixed I can't spell. or more I can't type and spell properly at the same time. I ...

thanks guys for the reviews. the next chapter is posted...uh I think under Chapter Two of Edinburgh Murders...i hope it is. cheers CL

oooooohhh....superb as Lucas would say...I really liked this. Especially the imagery and the laughing dolphins. *shiver* very nice job hon. CL

thank you dear, I will see what I can do with the second paragraph. CL

thats how the poem is supposed to be written. yah cheesy but I liked it sort of. thanks for the review.

edited finally! CL

what drug...uh lost of sleep...I was babysitting my cousins kids a beach, loss of sleep and too much caffeine. I think. thanks for the review. I rather like it too. ...

thank you dear. yes I love French, I am currently in the equivalent of french 5 at my school. such a pretty language. CL PS. you should post some of ...

thank you dear. I'll see to the editing. CL

very nice...I especially liked --- Music is....revenge. To write a swansong that need not be your last is a venture to take. By the way your title spawned a few ...